
The Dutiful Wife
In
a bid to tell stories that do not spoon-feed their audiences, some
film-makers then fall into the trap of making movies with gaps, which
irredeemably affect the understandability of the stories they tell. The Dutiful Wife,
Soji Ogunnaike’s short film for the Afrinolly Cinema for Change Series,
supported by the Ford Foundation, is ensnared in this trap.
The
film’s greatest burden is that in its first few minutes, it throws up a
lot of matters, which could not be handled in 28 minutes because the
film actually possesses material that can comfortably make up a feature
film.
What is
the urologist’s diagnosis of Francis’s impotence; given that impotence
is not necessarily a death sentence? No doctor asks her patient, ‘Is
the foetus a threat to you?’ It is the doctor’s responsibility to
investigate if the pregnancy poses any threat to the woman’s life, so
that question exposes a disappointing lack of research in this short
film.
How will a woman be
made-up at all times; even when she has just awoken to prepare
breakfast, dressed in a house coat? There are, at least, two instances
where the dialogue contains grammatical errors. Francis says, ‘… that
is if you have not drank it.’ Drunk is the past participle of drink. Mama Ibidun (Patience Oseni) asks her daughter, ‘Who came to our aids?’ Aid is the right word.
At
the end of the day, the film fails to make a bold statement on
adultery, impotence and marriage of convenience, which are some of the
ideas it toys with.
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